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Their Night

by WTiger

They had been together for awhile now. That is to say they had dated enough that they had nice long talks, and about the regular dose of new couple hot sex. Even more then that they had found out things about each other, some unspoken, some not, and some cried out loud for the neighbors to hear that they knew they had come close to finding a match in their publicly hidden roles. However this was the first night that they had spoken about only having those roles. Not just the playful fun of a date and suddenly they were hot and heavy and she looked up at him and he just naturally started to dominant this minx of a submissive. No this was more...this was...more.

He was nervous. He paced about his apt. thinking about tonight, thinking about it over and over even though he already knew what his plan was. He had thought about it for quite awhile now, and had luckily escaped work so he could relax. Ha! Relax as he paced about waiting for her to arrive. He finally sat down and just stared out the window, feeling the cooler breeze flow in...letting the mind drift away from the thoughts.

She parked in his lot. She was nervous too even though she knew she liked what had been transpiring between them. But she knew too that this night was still different. He hadn't told her what to wear or what the plan was, but she knew she wanted this night to happen. She laughed softly to herself as she walked up to his apt. thinking about what he will do or say....the excitement of knowing this was going to happen had been building up all week since they had first discussed this. Now finally about to happen as she knocked on his door.

He was brought back to the moment when he heard her knock. Nerves flooding him again for a moment before he stood and walked to the door, one deep breath as he took those first few steps and most of those nerves went away. It was here and just glad that the waiting was over..well most of it he grinned to himself...He opened the door and smiled as she looked up at him. Their eyes meeting that moment and can see a bit of the nerves still there for each, but yet comforting them both in that fact. She entered just like always, her cheerful Good Evening ringing in his ears. He returned her words with an Evening of his own before shutting the door. Normally more was said but this time the silence kind of engulfed them. When he turned the lock to his apt. the metal click seemed to ring out much to loudly. That noise kind of broke the silence...the look as their eyes met again. He gazed intently into her eyes as if seeing their color for the first time. He finally spoke, "Go to the bedroom and get undressed. Lie on the bed and I'll be there..soon."

She watched him for the moment until he finally had spoken. Eyes lightening up for that moment as she listened, and breaking his gaze as she whispered Yes, Sir back to him. She turned and walked deeper into the apt. doing as he asked. She felt his eyes watching her as she moved, feeling them traveling over her body and couldn't help feel a shiver run thru her.

She entered the bedroom and started to undress. She hadn't changed from work, she had just come directly over. As she was undressing she smiled to herself as this was the first time she had actually taken everything off herself. She could remember how he would hold onto her shirt or skirt...tease some before finally taking it off..or that one time when...they couldn't wait...a different kind of shiver runs thru her this time as she remembers that! Leaving her clothes in a neat pile she steps toward the bed, lost in thought as she crawls over the smooth sheets, cool beneath her naked body as she stretches out. Realizing he didn't tell her how to lie on the bed she curls up for a moment...listening to the sounds...able to hear him just on the other side of the wall. Her mind concentrating trying to hear what he is doing..and she can hear the flick of something...she almost laughs as she figures out it is the sound of pages from a book flipping. She turns herself and gazes up at the ceiling, stretching out her body again as she lays across the bed. Waiting...waiting...lips silently moving as she remembers how slow he reads...

He had watched her go, eyes aglow as he raked her body with them. Smiling to himself as he walks back to the seat by the window. Picking up his book and attempting to read. Trying to distract himself so she could complete the first task...and well, he liked to tease even though waiting this time was as much of a tortue on him too. Yes he read a bit slow, and slower right now as he knew what was going on just a few steps away. Hearing the silence as he started to get into a part of the reading finally. He kept going until he came to a good stopping point. Closing the book a little harder then normal just so she probably heard it. Then he slowly counted to himself...to steady himself one last time before he walked into his bedroom.

His eyes following the carpet as he walked in. The first thing he sees is her feet almost dangling from the side of the bed..gazing at them for a long moment before his eyes dart up to her face. Capturing her eyes as he gazes deeply into them again...holding it..before his gaze drifts..traveling along her body..her neck..chest..stomach..a slow side trip even to her fingers...noticing them moving a little..smiling brightly as it seems his gaze is discovering her body for the first time...sliding downward until they rest back on her toes. Stepping forward towards her, his hands reaching out, grasping her right above the knees and pulling her towards him...hearing her gasp as he does...her ass perched on the edge of the bed. His fingers holding onto her tightly..slowly he glides them towards her calves...feeling her flesh glide beneath his touch...bending her legs slowly back and resting her feet right on the edge of the bed. Watching her toes curl to grip the edge...grins a little wolfishly as he looks back up at her.

He leans forward, hands pressing into the bed beside her, his body hovering over her as he leans in closer, until his heated breath is dancing right over her lips...whispering low..I won't let you fall, you can relax those pretty toes...chuckling lightly...brushing his lips against hers, unable to not kiss her any longer..a slow passionate kiss...pushing against the bed as he stands back up, gazing down at what is his...He asks anyway, just so the words hang in the air...Who do you belong to?

Her voice cracking slightly as she had been watching him since he first moved into the room..when their eyes first met after he gazed up at her...her body had felt like goosebumps yet..warmed this entire time...and then that question...voice cracking as she speaks..I am here to submit to you...to belong to you, Sir. a small grin spreads over her face...make me belong to you..eyes sparkle up at him...

He smiles softly at her...leaning back down..nose to nose as a low growl slips free...Ohh I will..warm palm of the hand connecting with her sex, slapping it hard..I will...adding one more hard slap before lifting his body back up. Reaching out taking one of her hands within his...making the arm extend to its full length, gently easing back the leg on the same side and placing her hand on the back of her thigh..close to her knee, holding her leg back and open...a simple command...Don't let go...and doing the same to the other side, making her hold her legs back and open..opening up for everything to be seen, exposed...

With her hands holding the back of her legs, nails digging into her own tender flesh as she doesn't let go..feeling her body flush...her shoulders stretch to keep the hold, arching her back a bit to take some pressure off...eyes following him as he moves around...watching as he pulls out a feather..a feather!?..His teasing smile makes her groan...

Gliding the soft feather across her skin...he watches her body break out in goosebumps again..watching her squirm in the light tickles of the feather...not really using any pattern..just letting it flow about her form...circling a breast here...a quick rush over a nipple there...a half circle around her navel...his fingers brushing her too..holding onto the feather...before it tickles over her sex..drawing a moan as he lets it go...dropping over her..tickling her exposed sex...swelling with the excitement..his body shifting, leaning down and pursing his lips..blowing his warm breath over her..making the feather dance over the lips of her cunt..before the feather flips away into the air...His eyes turning slightly, lingering on her hand. The way her nails are digging into her tender flesh..that she will be marking herself, her nails bruising her skin to obey his command..something for her to look at later, to remember where she got the bruises, to remember why the muscles in her legs are sore and strained...

He rises back up, smiling fondly at her as he watches her breath...letting the tease stop for a moment as he admires his prize. He reaches up undoing each button on his shirt until he is able to be free of it...bending at the waist he lowers himself down upon her, bare chest pressing down into hers. The electric spark flashing as the heat of their flesh touch...lingering as he presses a soft kiss to her lips, whispering over them...you are doing well. Keep it up and I might let you cum tonight.

Her sighs with pleasure, feeling his body hovering over her...pressing his weight, the heat of his body warming her as she had shivered from the cool air and that damn feather...her lips smile up at him as he kisses her...eargerly kissing him back..listening to him and smiling brighter...and then hearing that 'might' word..almost growls at him...looking at his eyes, trying to see if he is just teasing...not able to tell this time...digging her nails into herself, holding on tighter to make that might turn into a will make me cum...gawd imagines just teasing the rest of the night..he wouldn't, would he?

Yes, he would. But not tonight...at least probably not as he wanted to make her rush over that peak...still...grins at her...moving back again..leaving the heat of her body behind as he reaches out, running his fingers along the curve of her ass..right above the edge of the bed..feeling her flesh...fingers exploring over the flesh that is going to be his..running the fingertip down along the crack of her ass...lightly toying with the crinkled tight entrance....watching her as he does..seeing her look up at him..watching her as he takes a deep breath..inhaling her excitement..she smiles and sees the blush rise in her cheeks...seeing her breathing deepen..teasing a little more before finger drops away...laying down by her side..dipping his head, lips nearly touching her ear...purrsss into it...That is mine isn't it. Mine to play with, tease....to squeeze..slap or spank...to slip beads or a plug into..to fuck if I so wanted...with my finger or a vibe..or my cock....I even bet you want me to do any of that right now don't you? I know you do..I can tell by your breathing..that moan that is caught in your throat..lips slipping away from her ear..reaching up and grasping an erect nipple, squeezing it between his fingers..giving a sharp tug as her voice lets the moan rush out of her lips..Yesss I do...

He watches her nipple spring back..the jiggle of her breasts..raising his fingers up to her mouth..tracing the curve of them with the pad of his finger...smiles as he nears where he started..just smiling as he looks into her eyes...knowing this is for many things as well..but leaving it unspoken right now..his eyebrows raise suddenly as her tongue snakes out along his finger..amused normally, enjoys her tongue action but tonight..uses it as an example that he is in charge...lifting his hand away...he smacks her cunt hard..feeling her jump next to him, and spanking it twice more...lifting his hand up, looking at it excusingly as if he didn't know it would get wet...lifting his hand up to her nose..letting her inhale herself...growls deep...now you can use your tongue to clean my hand...

She lets a little growl of her own out, yet she grins inwardly...eager to comply..to take her mind off her own nails digging into flesh..the ache developing in her legs...her warm wet tongue snaking out to dart over his fingers..cleaning them as best she can as he doesn't seem to allow her to wrap her lips around any...she purrs enjoying the taste of herself..her mind wanders a bit as she thinks about tasting him and her off of his...she snaps back before that grin slips out onto her face..the might let you cum still ringing in her head...

He watches her, the warm dart of her tongue...smiling as he remembers what else she can do with it...deciding it is clean enough..he lifts it away, clinging now with her saliva too...He grins as he reaches that hand out, taking her soft warm breast into his hand..squeezing it..drying off his hand on her flesh..feeling the nipple stretch out more against his heated wet palm of his hand..giving it a tug as he lifts it away...dragging a lone finger down the middle of her body...and off as it reaches her navel..

He slips back in front of her..dropping down to his knees as his eyes drop from hers to that swollen cunt right there in front of him...seeing the lips puffy with need, the flesh pinkened from getting slapped..mmm yess you sure enjoy what I do to this as well, don't you..even when I smack it..I know you enjoy it..His hand lifting and lightly tapping..but enough that her hips move upward..wanting to keep touching.. to feel her excitement, to keep going...she grins hoping more now that it won't be might cum..but that he won't be able to stop once he starts...she groans as she hears his voice..not that...the flesh around her cunt not the only pink now...as it floods her upper chest and face...fuck, not that question she thinks...he knows how hard it is for me to say that.......

His voice ringing out into the room, his breath washing over her cunt..wet..open..waiting for just what he asked..Tell me you want me to do it..say the words like the dirty whore you are for me. Say it and I will...

Please...she stops, having to draw her tongue over her suddenly dry lips..Please, Sir..take this whores sweet cunt...use your mouth on me...please..touch it........yessssssssssssss she lets out a soft gasping cry..His lips pressing to her, even if it is just teasing touch as he kisses along her lips...drawing a warm wet tongue against her..tasting her, her flesh as he circles around her entrance...knowing her cunt will flower open even more..his lips wrapping around each pink fold..sucking and tugging on her with his mouth..a wet warm grip before letting it snap back out of his grasp...

He teases her more, his finger joining his tongue as it plays with the outside of her sex..her hips rocking up towards his mouth...showing him how much she enjoys his attention, his sweet torture...his eyes flicker up to her hand..watching them embedded in her skin, almost ready to tear her own skin open as she holds herself wide open for him to take her with his mouth...pressing against her now as he circles his tongue...sliding it slowly inside of her heat..the walls already grasping at it, urging it in...draggng it along her glistening walls...feeling her tug at it, needing it...not able to roll his rrrr's or any such thing but his tongue can flick pretty damn good...and does that now..bouncing inside her cunt walls...feeling her soaking his tongue..feeding him her pleasure...

She moans and gasps in her excitement...riding in the moment..glad that she said it now..enjoying the feel of his tongue as it fucks her...rocking her hips eagerly towards his mouth..not able to resist..nor wanting too...she grins as he didn't say she couldn't and tries to grind into his mouth even more just because he didn't...she groans suddenly...feeling his finger tapping right between her ass and cunt...waiting, feeling his tongue still playing with her...groans slightly more in frustration...and let's the word rush out of her mouth...Pleaseeee...she cries out softly, and purrr rushing out into the room as that long finger slides into her heated cunt...grasping it tightly...gawdd yeaa..something nice, long and hard..so good after that tongue..groans as a second is added pretty quickly...feeling him spead them apart within her..she grasps at them..squeezing them back together...feeling his warm chuckle against her...and then his lips wrap around her clit..that chuckle rushing over that bundle of nerves...shhhittt...

He grins against her...lips enclosing around that bud..his mouth sucks drawing it inside..holding it tightly as he tugs at it...teeth grazing it now and then as it slips free only to be drawn right back within...his fingers rushing into her harder now..spearing up deep inside as she gushes out her excitement..trailing down and dripping onto the bed..his hand working his belt, opening his pants..growling against her as its more difficult getting pants off with one hand and a throbbing hard cock in there..the growl a mix of frustration and desire..and besides..he knows she likes feeling that growl roll into her body...his eyes look up her body, watching her rocking back and forth..letting her need take over...giving into it...his tongue suddenly lashing against her clit now...pushing her towards her edge...

He doesn't let up on her....pushing her body higher..lashing until his tongue starts to tire...feeling her grinding up into his mouth..taking those two fingers as deep as they go...fucking her open...even as she desperately tries to hold them inside..his mouth tugging once more, tugging on her clit before it wetly pops free..snapping back..gives a wet grin as he withdraws his fingers..sliding them down over her puckered ass...soaked already from her excitement..they tease a moment before he rises...knowing she'll feel the bed move as he pushes up on it...not as sure she hears the rustle of his pants dropping away with how heavy she is breathing..seeing her looking up at him...the pleading look about to wash over her face as that 'might let you cum' starts to pierce back into her brain, from the teetering on the edge of orgasm fog clouding within her...her eyes shift wide as she feels it... He drags the thick head of his shaft over her..held right against her hole...they groan deeply as he shoves it forward...his throbbing cock piercing into her tight dripping cunt...He grunts low as he bottoms himself out within her... His voice low, deep..echoes through her fog...You can cum now My needy fuckwhore..and she does..immediately her cunt clamps around him..over and over as the orgasm rocks her body..not noticing the pain of her nails digging into her flesh...her thighs quivering visibly..his hands on her body pulling her tightly up against him...


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